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Plan B page 6 by Biffno Plan B page 6 by Biffno
for the rest of the comic, go here! [link]
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:iconledaverix:
LeDaverix Featured By Owner May 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really lovele and cute Story... really unique artstyle aswell... it fellt really comfortable looking trough it...
sad ending though... poor fishlady :)
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PR-Slater Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
such a sad ending! but your ability to do an entire comic with no dialog is superb ^_^
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:iconmmmarika:
mmmarika Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely story but littlebit sad end. Nice work! :)
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:iconmadelei:
Madelei Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Professional Filmographer
OMG i lol'd so hard at that thing! :laughing:
but seriously this whole comic is amazing and beautiful
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DaVe24hrs Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
really nice!
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:iconlucianchung:
lucianchung Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
wonderful wordless storytelling. i also really like the gentle blue/pink/purple color scheme. =]
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:iconbiffno:
Biffno Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
Thanks!
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:icon2foxxie4u:
2Foxxie4U Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
Little Girl: WTF IZ DIS SHIT.
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:iconlittlefur:
LittleFur Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
I still remember reading this ages ago, and loving it.

if it's possible, I love it even more now :meow:
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:iconk-l-ee:
K-L-ee Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010   General Artist
Oh wow! I have quite a bit to say.

1) I love your style! The way you draw noses is awesome, and I love your hair, lips, eyes, hands... Everythning about the way you draw people is amazing.

2) I love the color palette used for this comic. The pinks and yellows were dreary enough to stay within the tone of the story, but still denoted childhood innocents and imagination in stark contrast with the green hues and grungy textures used to represent harsher, less optimistic reality.

3) Flounder was fucking adorable on page two! :la:

4) The thought/word bubbles were flawlessly executed. They blended right into the artwork. Loved the whole Thumbs Up, Thumbs Down thing.

5) Ugly mermaid's boobage was slightly disturbing, although I gather that was the whole point XD The little girl's expression of terror was fantastic on page seven.

6) You're an amazing storyteller. Everything flowed nicely, and you could really feel their emotions radiating from the pages ("screen" in this case, I guess :noes:).
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:iconscythemantis:
scythemantis Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is adorable and gorgeously done all on its own, but anyone who faves without reading the whole comic misses out on a lot.
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:iconkangel:
kangel Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010   General Artist
Hello! Just letting you know I've featured your beautiful artwork here! :heart: :D
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:iconkmajor:
kmajor Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010
I love this mermaid TO PIECES.

Great comic. So touching and sad and silly. Beautifully rendered.
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:iconprofessormarkus:
ProfessorMarkus Featured By Owner May 27, 2010
I absolutely adore this!
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:iconskeletonmurderer:
SkeletonMurderer Featured By Owner May 13, 2010  Student General Artist
I love you. Thank you for letting me experience that.
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:iconmissproblemchild:
missproblemchild Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Student Photographer
"We have lingered in the chambers of the sea
By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown
Till human voices wake us, and we drown."
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Fang11803 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Professional General Artist
The whole comic is so wonderfully done!
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Lumysaara Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
Oh my, I finally read the last four pages on your blog (after being firmly convinced that the story ends here - my bad ^^;).
Interesting and yet sad conclusion, I can't help but feel sorry for the underwater monster, but I do understand the girl's reluctance to become her friend. Because in the end, no matter how wild our dreams are, we would much rather stick with those of our kin rather than go with the strange and unnatural.
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loopieg Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
read this rest of the story...poor fat mermaid monster...
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ScribalWriter Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010   Traditional Artist
This comic completely enchanted me. Not to mention the complete hilarity at the end. There were such sad depths to the comic as well - an end to childhood magic and make-believe. Gorgeously portrayed. You have a lovely colouring style.
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:iconappollochan:
AppolloChan Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
This whole comic is just beautiful. I love it so much. D:

I especially love how you convey the story without even using any words, skills! o:
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:iconmissproblemchild:
missproblemchild Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Student Photographer
wait, is this the ending? From the comments, it sounds like there is more /:


I MUST KNOW

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:icontheoriginalhappydais:
The link leads to the artist's blog, which has the conclusive four pages. I recommend reading them, the ending has a profound amount of depth.
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:iconmissproblemchild:
missproblemchild Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Student Photographer
I did, and ooohhhh myyy god!
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:icontheoriginalhappydais:
I hope you enjoyed it. :aww:
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:iconmissproblemchild:
missproblemchild Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Student Photographer
oh yeah, it was amazing.
reminds me of J Alfred Prufrocks ending lines. I already posted them, I don't know them by heart.
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:icontheoriginalhappydais:
Cool. (May I ask who Prufrocks is?)
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:iconmissproblemchild:
missproblemchild Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Student Photographer
Oh! It's a poem, "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" By T. S. Eliot.

Here: [link] You should read it, everyone should. It's fantastic.

the final lines are,
"We have lingered in the chambers of the sea
By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown
Till human voices wake us, and we drown.
"
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:icontheoriginalhappydais:
Awesome. :D
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Poopgoblyn Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
I read the rest of the comic book on your page and I must say it shows a great deal of psychological depth, that is, when we think something is beautiful in fiction, and get ridiculed for loving it so much, to find out in truth in reality, it is ugly, we scorn it and become one of the people that ridicule.
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Seraph5 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
this is a really encredible comic! have you thought about pitching it to a picture book company?
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CarolineCherry Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Professional Photographer
I just read all of it....WAAAAAAAAAAAH! This is sad :(I mean, beuatiful and well drawn and deep and thoughtful, but sad.
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shinu-akamatsu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Student Digital Artist
That was so sad! Beautiful, I mean, but terribly sad.
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Quilsnap Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010   General Artist
aww man that was such a sad story, I wanna clean up the mermaid's lake

nice story spread though. good jobby
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DeadWizard Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
I read the rest of this on your blog. Awesome work! It's such a sad ending, but such is life. :( Your art is fan-freakin-tastic. I love it so much! Anyway, I just wanted to say thanks for putting this up for everyone to enjoy! I certainly got a kick out of it. :)
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flynfreako Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
really great :D
i feel like she would've wanted to help clean up all that garbage though XD;; or... i would've at least :0
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NinaCortex666 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
The whole story is great as I said, but the final is so sad D: Well how the girl could leave under water without breathing anyway?
Great comic, I luv it and with your style it just adds more originality. ^^
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Ivoryia Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
This is just great ^___^
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:icontheprimith:
ThePrimith Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
I read through the whole comic, and it is simultaneously funny and sad.
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Animefreak0003 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Defintely.. Poor girl's dreams, crushed and ruined.
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:icontheprimith:
ThePrimith Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
I'd say that's reality sometimes, but we're talking about mermaids here. :P
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Animefreak0003 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess it could happen if the dream job wasn't a mermaid? XD
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curlpop Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Professional Filmographer
oooooh this is gorgeous and so beautifully done!
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BedAndBreakfast Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
HI YOUR WORK IS INCREDIBLE
Haha seriously this is so amazing, I also went on your blog and I love everything you do man :heart:
Lovely comic, beautiful colors, A++ ; you're fantastic
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anya1916 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't believe the end... *wanna slap that stupid damned girl*
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SensationalSoftware Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! Love the style and the story is great!
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:iconsiansaar:
Siansaar Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
d'aww poor mermaid.....but such is life
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:iconmyoo89:
myoo89 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
in the end she wants to be an animal doctor
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Renegade-Hamster Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
Hehe, I just read it on your blog. Lovely! I enjoyed it very much ^__^
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Pandemoniumswings Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Just read it all, it's kinda sad. But I loved reading it. I love these artistic shorts, it was lovely to read and I will remember it for quite a long time.
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